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January 24, 2013
By Arrow.Kay SILVER, Woodstock, Virginia
Arrow.Kay SILVER, Woodstock, Virginia
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I worry that one day
I'll wake up, roll over,
and see that you have sunk
so far into the mattress that you have
disappeared,
leaving only the imprint
of your head on your pillow
and the lingering scent of loss.
I want to be a part of you
while there's still something
to be a part of.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Sep. 13 2013 at 4:06 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love how simply you define this picture of love. You're not emotional and complicated. Just simple. With little things people take for granted. That's what makes this poem exceptional.

on Apr. 17 2013 at 4:05 pm
bernadethr BRONZE, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"caras vemos corazones no sabemos"
~faces we see, hearts we don't know.

This is my favorite love poem. 

on Jan. 28 2013 at 1:23 pm
sempiternal_obsession SILVER, Camden, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
“Imagining isn't perfect. You can't get all the way inside someone else...But imagining being someone else, or the world being something else, is the only way in. It is the machine that kills fascists.”
― John Green, Paper Towns

I really love the last four lines, and this piece is really interesting. :)

on Jan. 28 2013 at 9:59 am
Arrow.Kay SILVER, Woodstock, Virginia
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Thank you so much! 

LiaBe PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 1:06 am
LiaBe PLATINUM, Bellevue, Washington
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Great piece! I love the simplicity of the article.




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