Tears to heaven

January 21, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu


Could our tears be sucked up to heaven and be traded for one dear loved one can a whole seven, seven tears are they enough enough for a fair trade would you trade seven tears for just one person How much would you give for just one to live ?



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on May. 22 2013 at 2:03 pm
Court901 BRONZE, Magnolia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagniation is not a talent of some people, but it is the health of every person" -Ralph Waldo Emerson

The title really caught my attention. You have a really good idea here and I like the last sentence. But I do agree with AmyLeigh.

AmyLeigh GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 7:16 pm
AmyLeigh GOLD, Pompton Lakes, New Jersey
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“One thing about human beings that puzzles me the most is their conscious effort to be connected with the object of their affection even if it kills them slowly within.”
- Sigmund Freud

I really love the idea of this poem, however I found reading it a little difficult. I think maybe if you spaced out the lines a little more, it would be easier to follow. As it stands, it reads a little like a run-on sentence.


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