Tears to heaven

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Could our tears be sucked up to heaven and be traded for one dear loved one can a whole seven, seven tears are they enough enough for a fair trade would you trade seven tears for just one person How much would you give for just one to live ?





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Court901 said...
May 22, 2013 at 2:03 pm
The title really caught my attention. You have a really good idea here and I like the last sentence. But I do agree with AmyLeigh.
 
AmyLeigh This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 28, 2013 at 7:16 pm
I really love the idea of this poem, however I found reading it a little difficult. I think maybe if you spaced out the lines a little more, it would be easier to follow. As it stands, it reads a little like a run-on sentence.
 
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