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Could our tears be sucked up to heaven and be traded for one dear loved one can a whole seven, seven tears are they enough enough for a fair trade would you trade seven tears for just one person How much would you give for just one to live ?



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Court901This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 2:03 pm:
The title really caught my attention. You have a really good idea here and I like the last sentence. But I do agree with AmyLeigh.
 
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AmyLeighThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 28 at 7:16 pm:
I really love the idea of this poem, however I found reading it a little difficult. I think maybe if you spaced out the lines a little more, it would be easier to follow. As it stands, it reads a little like a run-on sentence.
 
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