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The Earth stood cold, silent, still.
The leaves are in a trance, where none must move.
The air, that once danced with such grace..

Gone.

The creatures that roamed my backyard are now hidden and scared.
The water, once so talkative and alive, now silenced and dry.

The eyes you've seen these with, now silenced but dark.
You've lost your perception, you've lost your way.



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Brockili123 said...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 11:55 pm:
I thought that's it was a great poem. It had lots of feel to it, but not enough emotion... If you know what I mean:) Good Job!
 
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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 24, 2013 at 5:17 pm:
This is really cool:)
 
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