Don't Forget

January 14, 2013
By Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
Depressed-Ness SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
You can wish apon a star, but only you can make the dream come true.

You dont need boys, boys need you.


Can you see
The scars you left me
In my heart
Deep inside, I still care
Don't forget how we laughed
How we stayed side-by-side
I remember how we were
The tears tell me
All of it was real
Please don't forget
We were sisters til the end
I still care
Please don't forget


The author's comments:
I made this after my best friend and I got in a fight.

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on Jan. 23 2013 at 8:08 pm
kaitlynisweird SILVER, Portsmouth, New Hampshire
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It's a subject I can relate to, also. 

on Jan. 23 2013 at 8:08 pm
kaitlynisweird SILVER, Portsmouth, New Hampshire
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I'm not going to lie. I'm personally kind of sick reading poems about scars, both metaphorically and literally. If it's a metaphor, it's a bit cliche, and if it's literal, then...I don't know...I'm sick of
"emo" poems. It could be more original. But other than that, I liked it. It flows really well, and I could tell the subject brought out a lot of emotion in you. I hope you and your friend are doing okay now, of course, but if you add some music to this, it might make a good song. I could hear it in my head, hahah. :)


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