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The Loveliest Day

January 4, 2013
By Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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The loveliest day,when we learn something
The loveliest day,when we teach something
The loveliest day, when we help each other
The loveliest day, when we forgive each other
The loveliest day, when we stand and fight
The loveliest day, when we make world light
The loveliest day, when we make other smile
The loveliest day,when
The loveliest day, when we shine like star
The loveliest day, when we dream to be big
The loveliest day, when we try to be big
The loveliest day, when we try to touch the sky
The loveliest day, when we inspire others to fly
The loveliest day, when we encourage each other
The loveliest day, when we change each other
The loveliest day,when we think like leaders

And the most loveliest day, when we change the world ......


The author's comments:
love each other,live in peace and be happy..............................

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on Jul. 25 2014 at 1:34 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

So true, so wonderful, and very beautiful. Thank you for sharing this>

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2014 at 2:40 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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thankew

on Apr. 14 2014 at 4:24 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

I enjoyed the message of this poem, but there was a lot of repition. Maybe try not so much repeating? Otherwise great work!

Starakk SILVER said...
on Dec. 29 2013 at 3:09 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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thanx.............................:-)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Sep. 7 2013 at 3:02 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Awesome. This poem speaks the truth about many things. Yes, we should be happy and enjoy life. :) It will be the lovliest day when we all live in peace and change the world in the most amazing way possible... Very beautiful. Great job!

Starakk SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2013 at 2:59 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thank u so much..............

Starakk SILVER said...
on Sep. 7 2013 at 2:58 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 50 comments
thank u so much..........

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 10:03 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Very Nice :) :) :)

tiasa BRONZE said...
on Jul. 29 2013 at 9:49 am
tiasa BRONZE, Howrah, Other
4 articles 2 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To live would be an awfully big adventure" — Peter Pan

this is AWESOME!


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