Without a hand to hold

January 10, 2013
By EpicOwl GOLD, Macedon, Other
EpicOwl GOLD, Macedon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing can come of nothing ~ Shakespeare


We used to be friends, now where are we?
We would cry together, be shy together,
Now where are we?
The smile vanished from your face
And disappeared without a trace.

Now what we had is gone.
You left me alone
In the darkest of places.
Without a hand to hold.


The author's comments:
This is very close to me and my experiences.

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Emerson BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 12:00 pm
Emerson BRONZE, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"If you wanna live big, Do it"

It's really great and relatable. But it did seem to cut off suddenly... Maybe you could beef it up a little or add a little more length. Great work!

EpicOwl GOLD said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 6:08 pm
EpicOwl GOLD, Macedon, Other
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing can come of nothing ~ Shakespeare

I was meant to submit this to the Hot Topics area. I didn't submit, with all the nice comments... what should  I do?

on Jan. 13 2013 at 3:44 pm
j.g.poems PLATINUM, Naples, Florida
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SO relatable... I'm actually feeling this way right now.

on Jan. 13 2013 at 1:54 pm
phlogiston ELITE, Hermitage, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"A day without laughter is a day wasted" -Charlie Chaplin

There are so many times when I feel the same way. Great poem.

on Jan. 13 2013 at 12:15 am
Annibonny DIAMOND, Evanston, Illinois
67 articles 38 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes life takes a path that is hard to walk on, so all you have to do is put on your hiking boots.

this is so relatable! I love it! Nice work!! Keep writing! 

on Jan. 12 2013 at 11:19 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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This poem is very close to me and my experiences also. I am a fan of poems with a dark side, and this ending is done very well:)

EpicOwl GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 11:00 pm
EpicOwl GOLD, Macedon, Other
10 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing can come of nothing ~ Shakespeare

Thanks! Means a lot! I have another poem entitled "Faker". I think you might like it, another big ending! 

on Jan. 12 2013 at 1:28 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I really like the ending of the poem.  Nice work on it!  :)


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