S{he} Be{lie}ve{s} Him

December 19, 2012
By lovely34 BRONZE, Minneapolis, Kansas
lovely34 BRONZE, Minneapolis, Kansas
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He tells her that
he is madly in love
with her
She knows it's a lie.
She wants to believe
every word he says
but no matter how
hard she tries it
won't work. She
loves him more than
he could ever understand
he doesn't know she would
do ANYTHING to keep him
happy. He is
only telling her what
she wants to hear.
He doesn't want to hurt
her by breaking up
with her so he goes
behind her back.
She is loyal and faithful
to him.
She finds out the truth.
She doesn't want
to believe it but
she knows it's true.
He's happy with someone new
and she's happy with herself
for leaving such a worthless boy.

The author's comments:
This isn't about anyone that I know. I just wanted to write something about this because it happens everyday in someones life

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jan. 7 2013 at 11:08 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

The title did all the work in this poem. Its great! The idea is good and i think you addressed it well. I think maybe you could add more to the story and give the characters more personality but the way you repeat "he" and "she" is a nice touch. Good job!

Skyset GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 9:04 pm
Skyset GOLD, Goddard, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Use what talents you possess. The Woods would be very quiet if no birds sang there except those that sang best."
--Henry Van Dyke

Very creative Title! I love it. Nice work. :)


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