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S{he} Be{lie}ve{s} Him

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He tells her that
he is madly in love
with her
She knows it's a lie.
She wants to believe
every word he says
but no matter how
hard she tries it
won't work. She
loves him more than
he could ever understand
he doesn't know she would
do ANYTHING to keep him
happy. He is
only telling her what
she wants to hear.
He doesn't want to hurt
her by breaking up
with her so he goes
behind her back.
She is loyal and faithful
to him.
She finds out the truth.
She doesn't want
to believe it but
she knows it's true.
He's happy with someone new
and she's happy with herself
for leaving such a worthless boy.




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SkysetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 7 at 9:04 pm:
Very creative Title! I love it. Nice work. :)
 
PadoodalleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 7 at 11:08 pm :
The title did all the work in this poem. Its great! The idea is good and i think you addressed it well. I think maybe you could add more to the story and give the characters more personality but the way you repeat "he" and "she" is a nice touch. Good job!
 
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