Pakistan of Youth

December 31, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


Pakistan! my dear homeland,
You do not need to worry,
For one day you will stand,
In the row of peace and glory.

Though the present condition is bad,
And corruption is prevailing everywhere,
But you need not be sad,
As we will spread joy everywhere.

We, the youth, have the power,
Power to prove our noble claim,
We are the perfume of your flower,
We will bring you everlasting fame.

Then you will be proud,
Of the progress you'll make,
And by prosperity, you'll shroud,
We will die for your sake!


The author's comments:
It's the song of the patriotic youth, that will strive for a progressing country.

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on Apr. 25 2013 at 1:03 pm
MeggieMills SILVER, Baltimore, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I write...so therefor I am a Writer.

This is very good ! Ma Sha'a Allah! You are a very goo writer. Someday you will make Pakistan proud for sure!

on Apr. 24 2013 at 2:35 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I like this a lot....to me it's a story of redemption! Good job XD btw u use that pic a lot ;)

Nico956 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 1:53 pm
Nico956 BRONZE, San Juan, Texas
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Woow this one is good too :) I like it very much.  

on Apr. 21 2013 at 11:59 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

I always love it when someone is so patriotic about Pakistan! Nice poem! Post more!

on Apr. 18 2013 at 3:26 am
joejinny BRONZE, Kerala, Other
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
credibility is like virginity once you lose it you can never get it back

excellent patriotic poem i've ever heard .liked it

Sonza SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 2:37 pm
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
5 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

may d whole country read it!!

Sonza SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 2:36 pm
Sonza SILVER, Bhubaneswar, Other
5 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
An apple a day, if well aimed, keeps the doctor away. - P. G. Wodehouse

may d whole country read it!!!

on Apr. 12 2013 at 7:45 am
AbbaDabbaDoo PLATINUM, Mountain Grove, Missouri
43 articles 6 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Some folks are wise and some are otherwise. I guess we know which one you are.

Amazing! You are the best poet I've ever seen on here!

BlurAngel GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2013 at 5:35 am
BlurAngel GOLD, Bexleyheath, Other
16 articles 16 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is an Emotion of strong Affection and Personal Attachment.....

very well expressed.. really good...  

on Apr. 9 2013 at 3:37 am
romanticpoet GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
love is like a rose, it has many colors & sights of beauty in spite of having thorns

hope for the best ! ! ! only guys like u can heal pakistan

on Mar. 30 2013 at 6:58 am
SLim_SHaDy SILVER, Akola, Other
8 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Arise, Awake and stop not till the goal is reached!

Nice work man. Its a very important and very necessary message you are spreading. Well done.

on Feb. 24 2013 at 6:08 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
22 articles 8 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is like a box of chocolates; You never know what you are gonna get.

This is a rare gem. I hardly see or hear youth expressing their deep love for their country. Most are under the spell of colonial mentality, so this is such a nice work!  I feel you whenever I read this. :)) Good Job!  

on Feb. 19 2013 at 5:37 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
9 articles 10 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never had,
You have got to do something, You have never done!

I wish the same bro! 

on Feb. 15 2013 at 4:28 am
The_girl_at_her_desk SILVER, Delhi, Kentucky
6 articles 0 photos 13 comments
really nice....quite patriotic....such are hard to find these days....

on Feb. 10 2013 at 1:21 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 343 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

It's kinda got a national anthem thign going there lol. The rhyming is great!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 2:28 pm
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."

i love how you show the views of the youth because not very often are the youthful voices heard!

on Jan. 15 2013 at 10:23 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments
I like how you have potrayed the patriotism of the youth! good work..

on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:45 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

i like this one alot and how the rhyming isnt very forced in this one

on Jan. 10 2013 at 12:37 am
SiblingCoC BRONZE, Other City, Other
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I really like  very intersting

Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 6:04 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

This is really very nice... Our country will be proud of us one day (I.A.) :) :) :)




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