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Exquisite
January 3, 2013
Waif-like, she floats
Her movements regal
A queen regarding her subjects
She's the most terrifying person I've ever met.
© Lauren R., Edmond, OK
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This article has 4 comments.
the.odd.life. said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 3:58 pm
I really love this one! i love the ending too.
bright_eyes BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 3:56 pm
Thank you so much! That means a lot!
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 11:54 am
I don't know if my other comment was posted, but great job. The metaphor really sums it all up wonderfully, and the payoff moment at the end is the most beautiful part of the piece. Great job
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 11:53 am
Your poems all have a fantastic "boom" moment, where they pay off. THey're all great! Your vocab in this piece was phenomenal and the metaphor in the middle was wonderful! Normally, subjects and others fear the queen, and that's exactly what you captured and conveyed in this piece. Fantastic job@
