Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Rainbow Rainbow By Hamzawaseem, Lahore, Pakistan More by this author Giving an upbeat to the beauty, The hearts of the people soften, As they exclaim, "What a beauty!" « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 13 comments. Post your own! Report abuse abcxyz said... Apr. 22, 2013 at 2:53 am: Short and sweet.. Report abuse Jade.I.Am said... Apr. 20, 2013 at 1:58 pm: hmmm did you mean to repeat "beauty"? anyways, i liked the dialogue happening in this. interesting! XD Report abuse BlurAngel said... Apr. 7, 2013 at 2:51 pm: Loved it.. short and sweet... Report abuse Fallenoutofgrace said... Apr. 4, 2013 at 3:05 pm: short, sweet amazing to the last word Report abuse KayleneB said... Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:12 pm: Brilliant (: Report abuse gossamergirl said... Apr. 3, 2013 at 5:19 pm: Beautiful, truely beautiful. Keep up the good work. :) Report abuse Sunny225LuvsHugs said... Mar. 24, 2013 at 4:02 pm: beatuful and delightful ..... love how you kept it simple, still got the whole thought out...... Report abuse Sparkle1pops said... Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:00 am: This one is okay. It feels very repetitive when you use the word beautiful twice. the poem is to small for that. Report abuse in.this.moment said... Feb. 15, 2013 at 12:58 am: really beautiful Report abuse Monicaa said... Feb. 12, 2013 at 12:03 pm: I Love How It's Short And Simple But Yet Beautiful <3 Nice Job :) Report abuse loveshersheys said... Jan. 16, 2013 at 11:17 am: beautifully written poem. I love it! Report abuse baileyanne said... Jan. 15, 2013 at 2:31 pm: Short, sweet, and simple! Love it! Report abuse MysticLady said... Jan. 6, 2013 at 11:41 pm: Im in an organization for girls called the Rainbow Girls and this is very touching to me. its really good. May i show it to some of my friends in my organization?