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The rainbow appears but not often,
Giving an upbeat to the beauty,
The hearts of the people soften,
As they exclaim, "What a beauty!"

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abcxyz said...
Apr. 22, 2013 at 2:53 am
Short and sweet..
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 20, 2013 at 1:58 pm
hmmm did you mean to repeat "beauty"? anyways, i liked the dialogue happening in this. interesting! XD
BlurAngel said...
Apr. 7, 2013 at 2:51 pm
Loved it.. short and sweet...
Fallenoutofgrace said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 3:05 pm
short, sweet amazing to the last word
KayleneB said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:12 pm
Brilliant (:
gossamergirl said...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 5:19 pm
Beautiful, truely beautiful. Keep up the good work. :)
Sunny225LuvsHugs said...
Mar. 24, 2013 at 4:02 pm
beatuful and delightful ..... love how you kept it simple, still got the whole thought out......
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2013 at 11:00 am
This one is okay. It feels very repetitive when you use the word beautiful twice. the poem is to small for that. 
in.this.moment said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 12:58 am
really beautiful
Monicaa said...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 12:03 pm
I Love How It's Short And Simple But Yet Beautiful <3 Nice Job :)
loveshersheys said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 11:17 am
beautifully written poem. I love it!
baileyanne said...
Jan. 15, 2013 at 2:31 pm
Short, sweet, and simple! Love it!
MysticLady said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 11:41 pm
Im in an organization for girls called the Rainbow Girls and this is very touching to me. its really good. May i show it to some of my friends in my organization?
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