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I took a trip Within myself I saw Nothing A blank The unnatural sensation O

December 28, 2012
By colem BRONZE, Tenafly, New Jersey
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I took a trip
Within myself
I saw
Nothing
A blank
The unnatural sensation
Of nothing at all

It was thrilling
To see inner peace
Finallyn won
Like
A tribe
Conquering its enemy
And standing











all alone









Like a wisp of dust









Light as a feather

Then
a foreign army
Got ready to
Attack
And obscure
The destination
Of the trip
Within myself…

© Jacqueline S., Hanover, MA

The author's comments:
This describes the way I think sometimes. I frequently think about things that aren't related to what I'm doing
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