December 26, 2012
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Delilah has a
way with men her baby doll charms
and sparkling eyes

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ladybugsrock said...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 11:24 am
I like your poem, I'm just slightly confused. Her baby doll charms, shouldn't that be on another line? Sorry if I have this all wrong... Other than that I like it!:) please check out some of my poems and stories as well!=)
helloimustbegoing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 11:34 am
thanks:3 and origionally  it was a haiku,which has 5 syllables then seven  then five,but it must have gotten jumbled up when i submitted it  
ladybugsrock replied...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 1:47 pm
o no now I see! I thought it was free verse and then I was confused, haha:) im soo sorry! No i totally get what you were doing!:)
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