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Take a Bow

The curtain open to smiles and laughter
I didn’t know what would come soon after
when his hear turned from love
and mine sought something far above
but when he left, pain took his place
pain he knew I wouldn’t face
so now as the curtain falls
he watches from the halls
so he can see what’s happening now
go ahead and take a bow.



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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 27 at 3:10 pm:
I really like this! But when you say, "when his hear turned from love." what do you mean by 'hear'?
 
Nightrunner23This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27 at 4:35 pm :
It's supposed to be heart.  typo
 
Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 27 at 7:46 pm :
oh ok that makes sense
 
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