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Hey
Anybody out there?
I've wished on
every star
every 11:11
every prayer
I've
knocked on wood
crossed my fingers
I
said my prayers
went to church
said sorry
Where are you?
And why aren't you here?
And why
And why
And hello?
Can you hear me?



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OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 12:56 am:
Are you tlkn of love or god?
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4 at 1:24 pm:
I think this is one of my favorite poems ever! The only thing I woul change would be when you said, "and why and why and hello". It would be coolif you switched that to, " and why and where ,hello?" Also you metioned prayers tice youmight only want to mention that once. 
 
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