Should I stop trying to contact you?

December 22, 2012
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Anybody out there?
I've wished on
every star
every 11:11
every prayer
knocked on wood
crossed my fingers
said my prayers
went to church
said sorry
Where are you?
And why aren't you here?
And why
And why
And hello?
Can you hear me?

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OldYoungOne said...
May 25, 2013 at 12:56 am
Are you tlkn of love or god?
Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 1:24 pm
I think this is one of my favorite poems ever! The only thing I woul change would be when you said, "and why and why and hello". It would be coolif you switched that to, " and why and where ,hello?" Also you metioned prayers tice youmight only want to mention that once. 
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