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Feather secrets
floating upward toward the clouds
glissading my delicate mind
palms grasping the silky, snowy string
of a crimson balloon
curled around my soft finger
drifting up to the airy sky
fragranced with fresh flowers
dainty petals trickling down
fragilely dabbing my rosy cheeks
I slowly alleviate my grip
plunging weightlessly
disposed of my secrets.



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AbbyJJ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 2:36 pm:
Good job! You are an awesome writer!
 
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NeshreeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 3:25 pm:
Beautiful language!
 
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sadesddThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 25, 2012 at 8:45 pm:
Wow. This is seriously a powerful poem of what you are going through, real emotions & it comes across beautifully in a poem. We all wish we could have this. Great job capturing the feeling.
 
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