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I see the dear.
They're so dumb.
I stay quiet,
he can't be aware of my presence
I calm my nerves
Clear my mind
It's hard at first
My mind goes crazy
Then it gets clear
I see only the deer
The trees are gone
the leaves...
everything.
I pull out an arrow
This must be fast.
I put it on my bow.
And now it is the time.
My heart beats
I can only hear my slow breath.
I breathe in,
breathe out.
And I shoot.



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loveshersheysThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 24, 2012 at 1:06 pm:
I love this poem. It's so short and beautiful!
 
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