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I'd Like to dissapear

December 16, 2012
By Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
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Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

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I'd Like to disappear sometimes
Just like the morning moon
I'd drift into eternity
to shed life's endless gloom

I must be here for something though
I'll have to find my way
Through broken dreams and memories that people throw away

I'll walk along this lonely road and at the end I'll find
a place devoid of problems,
and that is where I'll hide

I'd like to disappear sometimes
Just like my trust in you.
A tested love, a broken dream,
Survivors are so few.

© Rosalie P., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
enjoy, guys. if you like it, feel free to check out my other short story 'Reconciliation' Thanks :)
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IMSteel BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 2:39 pm
IMSteel BRONZE, Wallhala, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Learn from Yesterday, live for Today, hope for Tomorrow" - Albert Einstein

"Brevity is the Soul of Wit" - The Which

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Very good rhymes, interesting wording.  I like it!
AbigailElizabeth SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 6:02 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

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beautiful! love it!
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 5:23 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

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Loved it! It was really unique and although it was short, it seemed like a "revenge" type of poem if you know what I mean. Great job, though! I enjoyed it. (:
Wille said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 7:36 pm
Very nicely written. Full of passion and feeling. Keep it up!
Elizabeth-of-rohan PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:33 pm
Elizabeth-of-rohan PLATINUM, Abbeville, Louisiana
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Pain is stronger than life, stronger than death, love, loyalty, duty.
~Essad Bey

"you are tired (i think) of the puzzle of living and doing; and so am i. come with me, then, and we’ll leave it far and far away—" - e.e. cummings

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Pretty good. :)
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:24 pm
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

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hahaha thanks Moni :)  
Starakk SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:16 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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sooooooooooo good
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 7:20 pm
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

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hahaha thanks :)
londongirl90 SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 7:18 pm
londongirl90 SILVER, Hanworth, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no excuse. If you want to write, write. This is your life, you are responsible for it. You will not live forever. Don't wait. Make the time now."- Natalie Goldberg

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Really good :) I liked it