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I'd Like to dissapear

I'd Like to disappear sometimes
Just like the morning moon
I'd drift into eternity
to shed life's endless gloom

I must be here for something though
I'll have to find my way
Through broken dreams and memories that people throw away

I'll walk along this lonely road and at the end I'll find
a place devoid of problems,
and that is where I'll hide

I'd like to disappear sometimes
Just like my trust in you.
A tested love, a broken dream,
Survivors are so few.



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IMSteelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 2:39 pm:
Very good rhymes, interesting wording.  I like it!
 
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AbigailElizabeth said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 6:02 pm:
beautiful! love it!
 
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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 5:23 pm:
Loved it! It was really unique and although it was short, it seemed like a "revenge" type of poem if you know what I mean. Great job, though! I enjoyed it. (:
 
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MoniSThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 8:16 pm:
sooooooooooo good
 
Rebel_without_a_cause replied...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 8:24 pm :
hahaha thanks Moni :)  
 
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londongirl90 said...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 7:18 pm:
Really good :) I liked it
 
Rebel_without_a_cause replied...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 7:20 pm :
hahaha thanks :)
 
Elizabeth-of-rohan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 8:33 pm :
Pretty good. :)
 
Wille replied...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 7:36 pm :
Very nicely written. Full of passion and feeling. Keep it up!
 
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