I'd Like to dissapear

December 16, 2012
By Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones


I'd Like to disappear sometimes
Just like the morning moon
I'd drift into eternity
to shed life's endless gloom

I must be here for something though
I'll have to find my way
Through broken dreams and memories that people throw away

I'll walk along this lonely road and at the end I'll find
a place devoid of problems,
and that is where I'll hide

I'd like to disappear sometimes
Just like my trust in you.
A tested love, a broken dream,
Survivors are so few.


The author's comments:
enjoy, guys. if you like it, feel free to check out my other short story 'Reconciliation' Thanks :)

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IMSteel BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 2:39 pm
IMSteel BRONZE, Wallhala, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Learn from Yesterday, live for Today, hope for Tomorrow" - Albert Einstein

"Brevity is the Soul of Wit" - The Which

Very good rhymes, interesting wording.  I like it!

on Jan. 7 2013 at 6:02 pm
AbigailElizabeth SILVER, Medina, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Scars are souvenirs you never lose" - Goo Goo Dolls

beautiful! love it!

on Jan. 6 2013 at 5:23 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Loved it! It was really unique and although it was short, it seemed like a "revenge" type of poem if you know what I mean. Great job, though! I enjoyed it. (:

Wille said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 7:36 pm
Very nicely written. Full of passion and feeling. Keep it up!

on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:33 pm
Elizabeth-of-rohan PLATINUM, Abbeville, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Pain is stronger than life, stronger than death, love, loyalty, duty.
~Essad Bey

"you are tired (i think) of the puzzle of living and doing; and so am i. come with me, then, and we’ll leave it far and far away—" - e.e. cummings

Pretty good. :)

on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:24 pm
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

hahaha thanks Moni :)  

Starakk SILVER said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 8:16 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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sooooooooooo good

on Jan. 2 2013 at 7:20 pm
Jesus_of_Suburbia SILVER, West Orange, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is only one god, and his name is death. What do we say to death but 'Not today' "
-Syrio Forel, A Game of Thrones

hahaha thanks :)

on Jan. 2 2013 at 7:18 pm
londongirl90 SILVER, Hanworth, Other
9 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no excuse. If you want to write, write. This is your life, you are responsible for it. You will not live forever. Don't wait. Make the time now."- Natalie Goldberg

Really good :) I liked it


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