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Cold Surrender MAG

December 20, 2012
By Anonymous

A cool white blanket falls
Upon the rubble-filled landscape,
Burning fires smolder at the foot
Of man's deadly technology.
A technology with tracks
That decimates all in its path.

It is over, all is lost.
The frozen steel sits idle,
Spitting up its oily bodily fluids,
As we wait for our captors.
Our captors of blue and blond.

Looking down at the frost-bitten ground
I find no comfort in this foreign soil.
It warrants death and destruction.
Soaring buzzards sputter above.
The harbingers of our demise,
Forewarning of the advance.

The falling winter heavies my eyelids,
Encroaching my body with weariness.
It is over, all is lost.
Our captors of blue and blond
A goose step away.

The thunderous roar of steel
Grows louder and louder.
The muffled voices in a tongue
Not understood but not so foreign.
My welcomed weariness dawns,
As the accents become distinct and close.

The captors of blue and blond are upon us.
The weariness pulls at me,
Taking me to a warmth
That I have longed for.
I slip away to dark
To familiar soils.


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on Feb. 2 2013 at 9:10 am
KevinBogdan BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Without music, life would be like white noise."

Thanks! Actually, it was a poem I wrote for my AP Literature class. We were told to write a poem employing imagery and this is what I came up with. :)

on Feb. 1 2013 at 8:20 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Awesomeness!! ;) but what gave you the inspiration?

on Jan. 16 2013 at 6:07 pm
KevinBogdan BRONZE, Ormond Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Without music, life would be like white noise."

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

on Jan. 16 2013 at 4:41 pm
EatWriteSleep PLATINUM, Orlando, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars- Oscar Wilde

Simply amazing. Beautiful job.