The Unexpected Surprise

December 15, 2012
By mina11 GOLD, Sylvania, Ohio
mina11 GOLD, Sylvania, Ohio
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The midnight moon shines,
The pathway to the deserted house
On Halloween.
The faint howl of wolves
Fill my ear drums.

I was dared
To go into the haunted house,
On Halloween night.
My best friend shivers
Beside me.
We slowly crawl up
To the door of the house.
I ring the doorbell,
And listen for footsteps.
All I hear is the faint sound
Of high heels clicking on the floor.
3 minutes go by.

No one answers.

My friend squeals next to me.
The door slowly creaks opens,
Then all the lights turn on.

And surprise fills my entire body.

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