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It's Time to Move On

December 13, 2012
By Abrony1475 BRONZE, Woodridge, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The song "Time"
"Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens."
"I learned to fly, without any wings."
"When you fail, you learn to succeed."
"The Blues are an easy thing to play, but a hard thing to truely feel."

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Let us go rejoice in the heavens when I die
But for now let me live on with my life.
Let me live on within this world,
This treacherous world of mine,
So that I may make peace with enemies
That I have found committing no crimes.
So let us move on dear and old fiend,
And I will see you again when I reach my end.
For when the mountains crumble towards the sea
There shall still be you and me.

© Ezekiel R.

The author's comments:
I just was thinking that sometimes that you need to move on and forget the negatives of your pastime, forget the moments that left you in despair. If you do that, then, and only then, will you be happy.
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Abrony1475 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2012 at 4:09 pm
Abrony1475 BRONZE, Woodridge, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The song "Time"
"Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens."
"I learned to fly, without any wings."
"When you fail, you learn to succeed."
"The Blues are an easy thing to play, but a hard thing to truely feel."

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Thanks dude! :)  
TickTockBANG SILVER said...
on Dec. 17 2012 at 11:55 pm
TickTockBANG SILVER, Botkins, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that what doesn't kill you simply makes you... stranger." --Joker

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This is absolutely lovely with the words you chose, and I like what you were saying with it--thanks for posting :D
Abrony1475 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2012 at 11:24 pm
Abrony1475 BRONZE, Woodridge, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The song "Time"
"Knowledge speaks, but wisdom listens."
"I learned to fly, without any wings."
"When you fail, you learn to succeed."
"The Blues are an easy thing to play, but a hard thing to truely feel."

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Thank you! I will be glad to review your work. :)
Inoui_Fou BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2012 at 11:00 pm
Inoui_Fou BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
the best kind of people are the ones that make you feel uncomfortable, in a good way.

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I really loved this poem. I felt the connection within your language. This poem almost made me cry, thats how strong your words were. Thank You. Please review my poems and give feed back:)