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Colours

If the sky is blue,
Than what's the ocean?
Sometimes I have no clue,
My mind goes to the pink cotton candy,
so fluffy and sticky,
sometimes its so tricky,
I peel the rotten orange and I feel sorry,
nobody watanted it,
might as well see Mari,
Purple i find, is like a bruising,
though many like the colour,
Life's all so confusing,
Grey is like the fog in the forest,
We're blinded, no light,
let's sing the chorus!
Gold as the dusk and dawn i see,
I lay silently watching,
And I make a wish to be free.



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Zach_M said...
May 4, 2013 at 3:23 pm:
Creative!! I enjoyed this... you had fun with this one. I could tell!! I like it.. it brought a smile across my face.
 
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AugustSummerFlingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:44 am:
this was cute :) I liked how the words flow.. It's like a multicolored beaded chain and it lightens the mood :) good job :)
 
LariElaine replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 6:49 pm :
thank you, i appreciate it :)
 
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LanguageLivityStanza This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 5:20 pm:
pretty good! i like the element of describing and the symbolism of the colours
 
LariElaine replied...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 6:48 pm :
thank you so much
 
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