Winter's Pallet MAG

December 9, 2012
By marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift


The wind is licking at your face,
and pinching roses onto it; they blossom
Conflicting against your bright green eyes
made humorous by the sun …



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on Sep. 8 2013 at 2:28 am
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Congrats on getting published :) I like how you portray the winter, not as bitter and cold, but as a physical being, almost, that can lick and pinch roses. Beautiful :)

on Aug. 28 2013 at 12:49 am
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

every line is beautiful and amazing in the figures of speech. pinching roses onto it, especially, is my fave. This deserves to get published!


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