The Dance of the Snowflakes This work is considered exceptional by our editorial staff.

December 9, 2012
Your fingertips whisk through my hair,
enlightening it with a dusting of snow;
dancing with it, the sparkling chill as your ballroom;
frosting it with ribbons; you twirl it around your finger
swirling through strand after strand, dancer after dancer,
caressing and goodbying

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thatunknownthingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 28, 2013 at 12:48 am
Your writing is incredible and drawing, I am inspired! Keep going!
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