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Dark kohl eyes search the midnight summer's dream,
Beyond the canopy of twisted flora
Across the sun rays kissed stream.
Her eyes,hopes engraved deep,
frisk the flowery tales across the horizon,
Once lost and forgotten,
buried under the age's yoke.
"I'l find love.",said she,
looking out the casement of towered walls,
little sure of the love she promised her soul.
Knights came, came men from across the world of riches and hues,
But none could touch her bosom deep,
Some said,"Her Highness is difficult to impress."
"Her pride will kill her slow.",said some.
No one understood the woman inside her,
Desperate to love and being loved.
She wanted no riches, no wealth,
Jewels she wanted nevermore.
All she asked for, a tinge of love.
unbroken, unconditioned, untamed
of the vileness of the world.
Valiant and juvenile,
she still awaits her Knight,
Chivalrous, bound by the 'cote of Love',
And yet still, her heart hopes,
"I'l find love."
If not in tonight's sunset.
then at tomorrow's sunrise.




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SunShine76This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 3:47 pm:
I enjoyed reading this. I love it
 
Eklavyaa replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 2:43 am :
Thank you. Keep reading and do rate. :)
 
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dark knight said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 10:16 am:
Good poetry. "Desperate to love and be loved". From a guy's standpoint thats a turn off because it reeks neediness. But you've put it so beautifully.
 
Eklavyaa replied...
Dec. 24, 2012 at 10:54 am :
Thanks a ton :)
 
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FauxedTeaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 9:57 am:
I love how you had taken a cliche subject and made it your own! It was descriptive, thought-provoking, and really well written! There are a few grammatical errors, but overall, this was an AWESOME poem!
 
Eklavyaa replied...
Dec. 12, 2012 at 10:41 am :
Thanks a bunch. Do rate my work. And i'l keep in my mind the mistakes. :)
 
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