Drinkin up

November 27, 2012
....pour it bartender
Or just give me the bottle
No I don't want to die
Of course I'll pay the bill
...pour it bartender
Let my soul lighten
Let me get some sleep
I need to forget
What should've been
....pour it bartender
Do what you're paid to do
I want it neat
three cubes of ice
and double the dose
...pour it bartender
i need to cry a bit
I need to feel a bit
Maybe just a little bit
...pour it bartender
The devil he wont take my soul
He's said my hell's up here
he Likes it when i squirm
When i lift the phone to call
and put it softly down
... pour it bartender
Play me something sad
I'll leave in a while
...pour me one more bartender
Its the last one
I swear
....pour it bartender
Let me forget, why you're pouring

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Scarlett_the_pegacornThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 2, 2013 at 10:18 am
This is amazing! Held me captivated till the last word. 
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2013 at 10:26 pm
THIS IS SO GOOOOD!! It's amazing XD I love the emotion and the feeling of getting lost beyond your sorrows. It's definitely a favorite :)
JeremiahSamuelTemple said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 6:36 pm
And on his way home, the memories of past mistakes come flooding back, as another of this demons trick to burn, just another trick to watch me squirm.

Keep on going. The scene is set, a story may form, as just another person's private storm.
Madison_E said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 4:16 pm
You created such an amazing scene with this poem, i loved it (:
hawgsbabygirl said...
Dec. 7, 2012 at 12:50 pm
i really like this it can really connect to people keep on writeing
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