November 22, 2012
They say when one door closes another opens.
But what happens when all the doors are closed?
And your locked in some room,
And you claustrophobic.
The walls start closing in,
You've led yourself to the end,
Because there's no way out,
But every way led in.

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CrossBowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 8 at 12:47 pm
not bad but keep working
-Duckie- said...
Dec. 28, 2012 at 1:01 pm
Ooooh. So much power in such simple lines! YOu have a gift. Check out some of my work? I wish this was longer!!
EPluribusUnum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 6:16 pm
The last line of this is absolutely fabulous. :)
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