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Glow.

November 23, 2012
By happyrocks SILVER, Regina, Other
happyrocks SILVER, Regina, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'It does not do well to live in dreams and forget to live'. ~ Dumbledore, Harry Potter


What is it in your laugh that

Makes my heart skip a beat
And turns
me
around?
Maybe the way

your eyes glow

warmth in the falling snow


my hearts slows

And when I’m

slowly



falling



down

What it takes to turn me around
Is all contained
In the millisecond of a glance
and if beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Then behold! You’re the most beautiful of all
And to think you don’t know I love you at all…


The author's comments:
What it's like to be in love with someone who doesn't like you back... The only way I know how to deal with it is write about it, and I was inspired.

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on Dec. 9 2012 at 9:49 am
ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well."
― Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince

I love this poem! It's so meaningful, so deep, so longing... Your title perfectly suits the piece, and adds a unique theme to your poem. The last stanza is also well-phrased and beautiful! Amazing job! Keep writing!