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when you say hello

November 21, 2012
By old_soul SILVER, Omak, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"frankly my dear i dont give a dame" from gone with the wind,"you were my new dream"from tangled,"you had me at hello", "your that special someone","the man that deserves you it the man that thinks he doesnt"

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when you walk through that door you tell me your ok and you say i just stopped by to say "hello".
you call my name ,say the words that make me want to say i love you but all i can here is "hello".
i can here you voice calling to me in the dead of night and i i yell out "hello" and you yell back "hello"

© Lindsay S., Billings, MT

The author's comments:
i used to love when i was dating my boyfriend he would say "i just stopped by to say hello" its so weired how a simple word or action could inspire us to chose a path that we use to think was impossible and he taught me how to believe.
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