when back way This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

November 29, 2012
when back way
1 (one) was
*l*i used to pretend that the
nice kids on the bright green playground
liked to play with me
'cause i was always the scary dinosaur, rawr!
or that on the tickly grassy fields
i really could kick that hopelessly
checkered ball
and everyone would cheer when i scored a goal, hurray!
but s-hush, i'll let you in on a li/ttle secret, i
no one else wanted to be the t-rex
i sucked at soccer

but you kn(ho)w what
~p~s. it's okay
i'll settle for watching the sunset
as i sit on the lumpy roots of the butt tree
and i'll leap onto the squeaky swings
tape post-it wings to the wind
and keep kicking my legs out
i finally touch that
that just is
a little bit
too high.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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juneday said...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 9:30 pm
 I love some of the images present in this poem  (particularly the "scary dinosaur") and the overall tone. At first I disliked the /**(); however, as I reread, I thought it began to give the poem a childlike misunderstanding of grammar, like something the narrator of the poem would have used..  However, I do find your use of /, *, (), etc., sometimes pretentious - like you're trying to copy e.e. cummings.  Also, some of your adjectives&n... (more »)
juneday replied...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 9:32 pm
sorry i meant syntax
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