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Can't Live

Take

away the pain that I feel in my soul.

Drown


me with happiness and joy.
Make

my life completely, and fully whole.

I can't live like this anymore.



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jdaniels1779This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 6:31 pm:
Hi got99 I can tell this was an emotional poem. I can really sense that in your word choice. It was deep dude :)
 
PurpleOreosThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 20 at 11:28 am :
Yeah it was, Thank you!
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 12:36 am:
That was short but sweet, and very imforming. Maybe you could try using stronger adjectives. 
 
PurpleOreosThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 20 at 11:27 am :
Thanks for the Advice. :)
 
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