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I walk in the dark
Wishing I could find you there
Your arrow not hitting the mark
Wishin’ I could run my fingers through your hair

Now I have a broken heart
My life is now over
Now I am sober
With a brand new start
Thinks to you I have turned around
Something’s are still upside down



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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 5:23 pm
First off, let me say thank you for serving our country. I really appreciate and honor you. Second, you're a great writer! This is an absolutely beautiful poem. It really touched my heart. I especially like how you added rhyme to the lines. It made it stand out. I love your last line!! Great job; I'm really impressed.
 
robertlow94 replied...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 3:54 pm
thank you and i am not there yet and my english teacher helped me get to be that good
 
PurpleOreo said...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 3:51 pm
Sweet, Short and straight to the point!  When you said "sober" for some reason I thought about  sobber from alcohol. I aslo liked the last two lines at the end, it ended your poem nicely.
 
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