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The Truth of the Pen

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They say that the pen is strong;
Mightier than the sudden sword,
Swifter than the roaring seas,
Louder than the moans of death.

But what chance does the pen stand
Against the minds of the fools,
Or the heart of ignorance?
Alone and bitter without
The author that gives it life.

So I say the solo pen
Is worthless in every bit
To the empty hearted, not
By the wise man who tames it.



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OpticalillusionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 11:50 am:
Alright,  first I loved your message and your similes, the writeing method made the work flow so smoothly, but on the otherhand there were some gramatical flaws.  You captialized every line, which is a no'no. Only captialze after periods, and you forgot a period after bit in the last stanza. Besides the minor errors good job.
 
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Itsme24This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 14 at 8:54 pm:
Wow...great thinking . You should write some more poems ;)
 
HayatC. replied...
yesterday at 11:53 am :
I agree this is amazing! Wow, great job!
 
beautyinsideoutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 11:43 am :
i love it 
 
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