A Thin Glass Wall

November 24, 2012
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My trust in you
A thin glass wall
So frail
Easily broken
I am blind
To lies
In plain sight

Hairline fractures
But still
I deny
Try to fix
And repair
You pile more behind
Start to overflow
I see nothing
La La La
I hear nothing

It is shattered
I cannot ignore
A tidal wave
It crushes me
I am drowning
All I wanted to forget
I am suffocating
You never really cared

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jetta.bugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 9:14 pm
This is really dramatic. I love how the lines are really short and articulated. It really is a great poem. I think you should add more poetic elements into it, though. I think that would make your writing really pop. (:
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