humming MAG

November 13, 2012
By marisafreedman PLATINUM, Sharon, Massachusetts
marisafreedman PLATINUM, Sharon, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Time was passing like a hand waving from a train I wanted to be on. I hope that you never have to think about anything as much as I think about you" - Jonathan Safran Foer


take me back
to the hours
when my eyelashes
would cut at
your frosty cheeks
and
we needn't rely
on bottles and
smoke
to make us
feel like
this.
tell me you
still feel like
this.
i still
feel like
this.



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on Nov. 26 2012 at 7:49 pm
marisafreedman PLATINUM, Sharon, Massachusetts
25 articles 4 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Time was passing like a hand waving from a train I wanted to be on. I hope that you never have to think about anything as much as I think about you" - Jonathan Safran Foer

Thank you so much!!

on Nov. 26 2012 at 7:06 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 861 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Short, sweet, and to the point! I LoVE this! I live how you say your eyelashes "cut" against frosty cheeks; it brings out lots of mood, intended or not. Great job!!!


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