Burning Sadness

November 18, 2012
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Sadness creeps up in souls
Like frost covered mornings,
And sweet sugar cubes.
Leaving collar bones,
And the spaces between your thighs
To soak up the quiet.
Silent like ghosts in the dark
Lacing their way through midnight
With heavy footsteps of the stars.
Foggy minds caked with hunger,
And red canyons running deep
Into words burned into our memory.

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MissExploration said...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 12:26 am
Your word choice is great, I love your diction and connotations. Great similes as well!
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Nov. 18, 2013 at 6:32 pm
Thanks you :)
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