Drowning

November 15, 2012
By sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette


Drowning
in a world
where they say I'm fine,
but I know what I

DID

And then the spoken words
too late to take them back
You laugh at me
I can't stand


YOU

Certain memories
have scarred my past
Remember that time when...?
or did you


FORGET

Happy, sad, cheerful, mad
Every cell and every detail
things that do and don't hurt
are what consists of

ME

So many promises I made
that make me hide
not ready to leave though
I haven't gotten there
YET

When it's the end
and we all give up
Will you be the one
to help my soul


?


The author's comments:
DID YOU FORGET ME YET? that's the main message.

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on Apr. 2 2013 at 11:51 am
sweetangel4life GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
19 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet". Romeo and Juliet ( Quote Act II, Sc. II).

"Let them eat cake."
Marie Antoinette

thanks. i really appreciate your feed back :)

on Mar. 28 2013 at 5:44 pm
Elphabalover72, North Ridge, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People are going to bitch about me anyway so I might as well give them something to bitch about," Helena Bonham Carter.

Wow. This is really deep and well written. Great job:)


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