The Girl in the Rain MAG

November 6, 2012
By AtisticPoetForMyGood PLATINUM, Monticello, Georgia
AtisticPoetForMyGood PLATINUM, Monticello, Georgia
26 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
its funny how the person you'd jump in front of a bullet is normally the one behind the trigger


Dressed in a sundress
Under the pouring rain
She twirled around
Raising her hands to the air
Droplets fell onto her hair

Barefooted as she started dancing
Letting her hair free
She's the girl in the rain
The water numbed all her pain

Her grief hidden behind a mask
She lifted her eyes to the sky
And started to dance
Throwing away all her sorrow
She started to smile again
She's the girl in the rain

Nobody knows who she was
No one knows where she came from
All they knew she was silent
Like the wind in everyone's hair

Soaked, wet and cold
Ignored, rejected and unappreciated
Like the roses in her hands
Wilted and dead
She let the rain fall onto her head
She's the girl in the rain

Everything was different
After she left
All they could remember
Time and time again
Silent from all her pain
She was the girl in the rain



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animedcfreak said...
on Nov. 27 2015 at 2:04 am
That depends. Most clowns aren't trying to freak anyone out. They're meant to make people laugh and to entertain us. The only ones that are meant to make people scared are ones in haunted houses. But come on, they're people with makeup and they're comedians.

on Dec. 17 2014 at 1:38 pm
AtisticPoetForMyGood PLATINUM, Monticello, Georgia
26 articles 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
its funny how the person you'd jump in front of a bullet is normally the one behind the trigger

thanks everybody, it really means alott

awesome_me said...
on Mar. 15 2013 at 3:51 pm
i liked your poem it was great and reminds me how i used to feel

shaq96 SILVER said...
on Dec. 22 2012 at 5:27 pm
shaq96 SILVER, Newton, North Carolina
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I love the way you used repetition in the poem!!! This is a great poem!!!!

on Dec. 22 2012 at 11:16 am
VickyNickyKitty SILVER, Lincolnton, North Carolina
5 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Praise him with the tambourine and dancing; praise him with strings and flutes!
-Psalm 150:4

This was seriously one of the best poems I have ever read!  I love the meaning, awesome job!

kmcn33 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 22 2012 at 9:06 am
kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
4 articles 3 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was much too far out all my life / And not waving but drowning

This is so amazing I got chills reading this... keep up the good work!


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