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November 9, 2012
By Julliete.AE BRONZE, Denpasar,Bali, Other
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Julliete.AE BRONZE, Denpasar,Bali, Other
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Wise men speak because they have something to say; Fools because they have to say something.
Plato

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The cloud is black like a pan.
The sun frowned and faded away.
The water fells on my cheeks,
And the wind blows and coughs.
It began to be bigger and bigger,
And larger till’ the sun smiles to me,
Like the moving tail of a dog playing in the sand.
What a beautiful day I’ve enjoyed,
Seeing the raindrops fell onto the ground.

© Carly M., Hopedale, MA

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“Well, I knew this poem sounds weird, and short not like what other people made, but this is mine ? please accept it”
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