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Thin Ice

You, exactly like thin ice, so deceptively calm on the outside,while churning with unseen dangers underneath it all,waiting to break underneath someone.

you burst, your rage breaking loose washing over someone hurting them,making them run away,not talk to you for a few days as the ice rebuilds,as you go saying that they're spreading rumurs about you when they only tell the truth

after a few days the ice finally rebuilds and he comes back to you, only to start the cycle all over again.And eventually, he won't come back because he's tired of this merciless cycle.



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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 4:03 pm
I said this to OldYoungOne in her poem Shell. We see the outside but don't see the inside. I love your message here. 
 
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