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Sorry that you put yourself in there, Sorry that you own hell is what you made. You the one who put the pin in your arm so that you could get high. Sorry that you are by yourself. The one thing that I'm not sorry of is your pain, your sadness that is all your doing not mine.




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HazelGraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:44 pm:
The wriring style is good and so is your topic and the way you convey it. I would suggest using line breaks more effectively and intentionally to make it more poetry-y. Good work 
 
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