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Dreams,
the whiskey of sleep,
pulling me into a trance,
of fantasy; of sorrow.
the reality of tomorrow.
What shall we do,
to limit, me and you?
A life-long fantasy,
and love true does morrow.
Think of the life,
that we could've had.
A mystery, we're seeking,
a reality, might be leaping,
like stars and the moon,
and mocking through and through.
Mocking my dreams,
mocking my heart, my life,
my sorrow, through the dreams of tonight,
and the dreams of tomorrow.



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Larsen said...
Nov. 9, 2012 at 11:35 am
Nice!!!!!  really!
 
HiChanelThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 4, 2012 at 5:07 pm
This was good, I really liked it. To me, its almost hauntingly beautiful. Good Job.
 
writerlady14_ replied...
Nov. 5, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Thanks HiChanel, I'll have to read some of your work some time. Glad you enjoyed it. More to come.
 
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