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Whiskey burning

October 31, 2012
By ldiercks_14 SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
ldiercks_14 SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
lack of faith is fatal.


Dreams,
the whiskey of sleep,
pulling me into a trance,
of fantasy; of sorrow.
the reality of tomorrow.
What shall we do,
to limit, me and you?
A life-long fantasy,
and love true does morrow.
Think of the life,
that we could've had.
A mystery, we're seeking,
a reality, might be leaping,
like stars and the moon,
and mocking through and through.
Mocking my dreams,
mocking my heart, my life,
my sorrow, through the dreams of tonight,
and the dreams of tomorrow.


The author's comments:
This basically describes living by a dream, people will hate on you, and support you. You've just got be tough and stay true.

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Larsen SILVER said...
on Nov. 9 2012 at 11:35 am
Larsen SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
pain is real-Have it come natural, not on perpose.

Nice!!!!!  really!

on Nov. 5 2012 at 3:11 pm
ldiercks_14 SILVER, Minneapolis, Kansas
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
lack of faith is fatal.

Thanks HiChanel, I'll have to read some of your work some time. Glad you enjoyed it. More to come.

on Nov. 4 2012 at 5:07 pm
haileeinc BRONZE, Las Cruces, New Mexico
3 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Work until your idols become your rivals", "May the bridges I burn light the way"

This was good, I really liked it. To me, its almost hauntingly beautiful. Good Job.


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