Alaska is not what i thought

October 28, 2012
By ashlynhansen BRONZE, Midland, Texas
ashlynhansen BRONZE, Midland, Texas
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Alaska is not what I thought

By far it is my favorite vacation spot
I pictured it snowy and cold,
Not a place with a ton of gold

Instead it was as green as a frog
With mountains topped with fog
The weather was a little chilly
You can’t see the ground covered in lilies

Once we got into the mountains
The rain was a fountain
As we reached the top
I could feel my ears beginning to pop

You can smell the pine from miles away
I prayed I would get to stay
You can hear the wolves howling a lot
Alaska is not what I thought


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