The Sounding Sea

October 21, 2012
By Plume BRONZE, Milano, Other
Plume BRONZE, Milano, Other
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As the sun shone and the waves drew in and out, I walked and walked along the shore against the sounding sea.
Palm trees swayed and the birds sung their usual hum just like the beautiful sea.
The sun went to bed and I danced in my head. Then the moon came out and hovered over us. It’s magnetic glare stared deep into my eyes and hypnotized me.
The stars were like magic and I covered my toes in the golden sand.
As the moon shone and the waves drew in and out and I walked and walked against the sounding sea, my beautiful, wonderful sea.



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Plume BRONZE said...
on Aug. 18 2013 at 1:16 pm
Plume BRONZE, Milano, Other
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thank you so much <3

on Aug. 17 2013 at 6:55 pm
Superhero_Fan SILVER, Tomorrowland, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Impossible; for How many people did you know who refracted your own light to you?” - Fahrenheit 451

Wow, that was pretty good! I, too, felt as if I were walking on the beach. I loved the line where you said 'It's magnetic glare'. I never would've thought to describe the moon as magnetic! Good job.

Plume BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2013 at 2:44 pm
Plume BRONZE, Milano, Other
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thank you 

on Feb. 18 2013 at 3:08 am
Matthew17 SILVER, Bainbridge Island, Washington
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This is really really good. I was a bit apprehensive at first because the ocean is such a typical poetry topic but you wrote this really well and made me feel as if I was on the beach. Loved this! Keep it up


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