My Sweet Love

October 19, 2012
By dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau


Oh my sweet love,
what has thou faced upon such dreary a nigh'?
Tis' fever in your cheeks,
and blisters upon thy palms.
Such teary eyed sadness that has befallen you,
a bitter strike of the tongue,
that has rested itself in your heart.
For there lay a stormy ocean,
crashing waves in your eyes.
and is so thou'st smile,
a broken, yet once lively grin,
seemed as if carved upon yee ashen features.



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dya.o PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2013 at 9:18 am
dya.o PLATINUM, Milton, Florida
43 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If consensus is overrated, I think balance is, too.
I have no interest in living a balanced life.
I want a life of adventure.” | Chris Guillebeau

Thank you :)

on Feb. 25 2013 at 4:01 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Good syntax. You write very well.


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