That Special Moment.

October 25, 2012
By Sarah Brown BRONZE, Edgar Springs, Missouri
Sarah Brown BRONZE, Edgar Springs, Missouri
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Sitting side by side
on the couch,
I look deeply into your eyes.
I see the true love,
the true passion
present in your heart.

Nerves sweep
over me.
Shy, anxious,

Hoping you’re thinking the
same as me,
We come close.
We kiss.

So smooth and gentle.
So peaceful and calming.

Fulfilling my wish,
I feel satisfied,
I feel accomplished,
I feel whole.

Feeling as if God
has sent you to me,
I knew this was right,
I knew you were right for me,
I knew we were right for each other.

Hearing the words in the distance,
“Every long lost dream,
Led me to where you are”,
It had to be right,
It had to be true.

The author's comments:
Reminds me of that one moment. Every time I think about it I smile.

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on Oct. 29 2012 at 1:34 pm
LestyPatrick PLATINUM, Darlington, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Failure is, in a sense, the highway to success, in as much as every discovery of what is false leads us to seek earnestly after what is true, and very fresh experience points out some form of error which we shall afterward carefully avoid"John Keats

Simply beautiful :D I have a special moment like this too ^_^


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