October 24, 2012
By Anonymous

Lights off

Face to face

Intense darkness

Bodies moving as one
Hands firmly joined together

Irresistible enthusiasm
Rhythm in our ears run up and down
Overwhelming tension throughout

Heartbeats are strong


Tightly held

Face in palm

No worries

Impatience lingers

Overpowering silence

Locked eyes unbreakable
Unimaginable trust fills the air
Isolated from the world around us

Capturing every breath

Every second

Seconds turning into minutes

Minutes into hours

The author's comments:
I love writing about experience and allowing people to see my perspective. I wrote this piece so see if people can picture this. Leave comments and tell me what you think:)

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