My Own Person

October 24, 2012
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I will not be commanded
I will not be controlled
Your dark hate and presence will forever be destroyed
How you take the happiness from me, the light from my eyes, and
The breathtaking smile on my face.
But I will not let you control my life and leave me miserable
I will not embrace the bitterness that wants to take hold of me like it did with you
Im my own person now
Get used to it

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Dead_Silent said...
Nov. 10, 2012 at 7:43 pm
I thought that was a beautiful poem. You may not think that was your best, but that was amazing:)
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Nov. 3, 2012 at 4:56 pm
That's so beautiful. I'm so impressed. Great job! Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!
MidnightBlue18 replied...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 6:53 pm
Thank you so much. You do the same as well!! your work is the best...
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