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It was the heavy breathing
i think
that I liked the most
our mouths made no movement
as our faces dried
and sternums rocked
planted kisses in a chalk line
wet florettes on my chest
pretended to worry
about potential marks on my neck
but so gently you bit
in a aggressive manner
heart rate risen
resulted in the breathing



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didyou_notice_007 said...
Oct. 28, 2012 at 2:09 am:
Hi. I really like this. I love how it says about the breathing in the beginging and then wraps it up in the end with "-resulted in the breathing". Love it. Good job!
 
lizpaula replied...
Oct. 28, 2012 at 1:13 pm :
woww, thank you alot :D
 
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