Descent Into Madness

October 19, 2012
By hunterofartemis726 BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
hunterofartemis726 BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving your body." :)


Can't see, Can't hear
Slipping into a realm of fear
Nevermore, Never here
Happiness you hold so dear

Eyes pop open
Gasps of air
Wet from tears
Heart stripped bare

Shadows dancing in the night
Wishing for fulfilling light
Something, Anything
A twist of sight

Choking darkness closing in
Red Demons full of sin
Splotchy rhythms of tchaikovsky
No more Not here


The author's comments:
I feel strongly about this piece. Any critiques welcome.

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on Nov. 26 2012 at 7:14 pm
hunterofartemis726 BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving your body." :)

Thanks! I really apreciate it!

on Nov. 26 2012 at 10:32 am
GuardianoftheStars GOLD, Shongaloo, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Let's tell young people the best books are yet to be written; the best painting, the best government, the best of everything is yet to be done by them."
-John Erslcine

I really liked it ^_^ And I loved the flow of the words too.


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